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Re: Secret Betrayal
I trusted you With all of my heart With all of my soul I trusted you I leaned on you When times were tough When I fell down I leaned ...
Jun 11, 2010 -
Re: Hello - read it,or the evil unicorns will eat you
Hey! I have a talking fish that inhabits my brain too! Wow, that is insane stuff. can you please contact my therapist and tell him I am NOT crazy! Just ...
Jun 10, 2010 -
Re: Leah
Yeah, when I was writing it, it seemed a bit awkward. Not one of my better ones and every time I reread it, it gets worse. Thank you for reading ...
Jun 6, 2010 -
Re: Leah
L is for lovely in every single way E is for enjoying your presence during the day A is for your IQ that must surpace us all H is for ...
Jun 6, 2010 -
Re: Lost In A Daydream
Lost in a daydream, I sit here and write, About worlds unknown, Or friends in a fight, My eyes have gone blind, My ears have gone deaf, Everything around me, ...
Jun 6, 2010 -
Re: I Think I'm In Love
One again, not so long. But it came to me today, after an incident :) Hope you like it! Please! Comment! I love your opinions! And any suggestions! I'm open ...
Jun 4, 2010 -
Re: Walls
This was for an English project about walls, so, yeah... High above trees, I may rise, Or a small sapling, May be my size, I may be real, I may ...
Jun 4, 2010 -
Re: Love (not long at all, kind of random...)
Yeah, just thought this one up really quickly. You know, just thinking about something totally random and all of a sudden *POW* this stupid thing comes in my head! Sounds ...
May 27, 2010 -
Re: Photos!
They are soo cool! I love the first one because, well it's just really cool looking. But the second one and the third one are kind of, odd... But the ...
May 26, 2010 -
Re: Story Book Cover? :]
Hey, OK so I liked this. It seems good! I guess it would probably make more sense if I knew what the title of the story was and what it ...
May 23, 2010 -
Re: Unknown Name (Sorry)
Sorry if my short story is actually pretty long, I'm not used to short stories. And I have no ideas for a title, so please, titles! Pleas, please, please comment ...
May 19, 2010 -
Re: "It's the Rules!"
Helloooo, Everything about the story was already talked about so I'll just give you my opinion. It sucked JUST KIDDING! I loved it! You have a knack at writing and ...
May 15, 2010 -
Re: Girl Portrait (Focusing on Hair)
I really like this, it's nice. The hair seems realistic enough. I'd have to say that you did good on the one eye that's showing, but on the eye that ...
May 15, 2010 -
Re: Bye for now. Part II
Hey, OK so first of l I would like to say that I'm not the best reviewer/editor person, just putting that out there. But I can say that some parts ...
May 15, 2010 -
Re: Little Bird
It's beautiful, you must be proud of your mom. She must be an amazing artist. But I guess anyone who can paint anything without numbers is a good painter to ...
May 14, 2010
