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Re: Long Story Short
This was the story of a girl with a plan, who wasn't one to give into those things that most high school girls did. This was the story of a ...
Dec 13, 2011 -
Re: Swaying Over the Borderline
What happens if you had something good, and then you lost it? Your own ignorance and pride lost you the most important thing in your life. What if your own ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: The Cold Hard Truth
Do you want me to cry? 'Cause it's not gonna happen. Do you want me to tell you I love you still? 'Cause I won't. Do you want me to ...
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: Please Just Let Me Cry
Anger boils to the surface, my hands clench tight. Faces loom in front of me, and make me want to fight. Infuriated and dissapointed, I push it all back in. ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: Why?
Why? Just one question. Tell me, please. Why? Was it something I did? Or was it you? Just tell me why. I can't stop thinking about you, you know. Why? ...
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: If I Thought This Would Happen
If I thought this would happen, I wouldn't have let you sit by me that day. If I thought this would happen, I would have ignored you more often, And ...
Aug 26, 2011 -
Re: The Supposed to be Scary, Not Scary Book
lol, thanks, maybe I will right what happens next ;)
Aug 21, 2011 -
Re: The Supposed to be Scary, Not Scary Book
In 1524 There was a sister and a brother andd they had a mom and a dad. And somthing horrible happend. I am here to track down evidence and tell ...
Aug 21, 2011 -
Re: The Who, What, Where, When, and How's of Leaving
What is it about you that I cannot resist? How do you make it so that you're always missed? Who do you think you are, to do this to me? ...
Aug 17, 2011 -
Re: Chapter One
May 26, Thursday 10:00 AM Some back road near Milan, Michigan It’s such an incredible feeling when you’re driving a nice, classic convertible down a country road. Letting the wind ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: I will always love you. *old*
Aww, this is sad. It was great though. And I loved the idea behind it. Hey, not all stories have happy endings. Most of the good stories don't. Romeo and ...
Jul 22, 2011 -
Re: A Tribute to Harry Potter
It's good. I love reading Harry Potter too! There are a few mistakes though. Mostly grammer. First, reread it all through and decide where to put the commas at the ...
Jul 14, 2011 -
Re: Crazy Little Thing III
Oh. My. Gosh. I got to the end and I'm what the heck? Why did it stop? And then I remembered that this is YWS and it's not finished yet. ...
Jul 11, 2011 -
Re: Love At Sight Chapter 1
Hi, I'm Leah, I'm gonna review your lovely peice of work here. First off, let me just say that I love your vocabulary in this. I especially enjoyed that you ...
Jul 11, 2011 -
Re: Anorexia?
Hey, PM me! First off, my name's Leah. I'll be 15 in September, and I have an EDNOS (Eating Disorder Not Otherwise Specified). This year I did a whole multigenre ...
Jun 26, 2011
