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Re: Werewolf Lovesick Blues Chapter 1
It seems pretty good.You should revise it more carefully though.Also maybe add some more descriptive detail...Oh, also you may want to use a different way of describing the animal that ...
May 4, 2008
It seems pretty good.You should revise it more carefully though.Also maybe add some more descriptive detail...Oh, also you may want to use a different way of describing the animal that ...
May 4, 2008
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