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Re: My Master, my Lover.
This was really good-kinda creepy but really good.I like the title...But yeah-keep on writing...
May 5, 2008 -
Re: BAthory piece
That's pretty good,a creepy story but none the less good.You said you made some corrections so it's kind of hard to give you suggestions.Justs tell me when you write the ...
May 4, 2008 -
Re: Werewolf Lovesick Blues Chapter 1
It seems pretty good.You should revise it more carefully though.Also maybe add some more descriptive detail...Oh, also you may want to use a different way of describing the animal that ...
May 4, 2008 -
Re: God of the Underworld: Chapter 1: (revised)
It seems really good, but you might want to go over it again.You have some spelling errors and stuff like that happening. Keep writing! :D
May 3, 2008