icebender28

There are people in this world, who are kept secret, called the Blazed. Each one has his own special power. Mine, for instance, is fire. When each of the Blazed ...

I liked it. I liked how you set the scene and characterized. near the ened though, you began to be a little confusing. I'd love to read more!

I loved it! I would really like to read more! Gret charaterization and the first couple of lines really brought me in. Keep writing!