icebender28

Thank you for all of your comments! They really helped me! I did make this for a contest, BTW, and, in light of all your comments, I will make it ...

I raised my right hand. Then my left. Something was off. I had awoken to my regular alarm, got up, taken a shower, and brushed my teeth and was about ...

I really liked it! I thought it was cute how you took Remus and Tonk's story and built on it, even though they don't really talk about it in the ...

I think you did a fantastic job! This is really cool, and I like the feel you gave to it. Honestly, i thought you did a great job with the ...

I looked at Itaeo. "They could hurt you immensly trying to kill you, or they could lock you up and you could just leave. But I'm not gonna let you ...

tess: "Fine." I said. Jared began to protest, but I grabbed his hand and ran towards where Davnick had pointed and hid. I looked at Jared's face and almost laughed. ...

Tess: Jared is an idiot. First, he goes off talking to someone who's passed out, and then he calls Davnick's story bogus! Which it was by the way, Ithink. He ...

tess: yes! I thought. Finally, we were getting somewhere. I had been wanting to attack the government for years, and now, we had enough people, even if there was only ...

Shadow, Thank you so much for posting and getting things started again! Aritha: Everybody stood around, trying to think of a way to protect them, and me. I did not ...

This looks so FUN!!! oh and, byt the way, GO BLEACH!! Name: Zera Venn Age: 19 Gender: Girl Type of Wielder (Mage, Sorcerer/ess or Enchanter/ess): Enchantress Powers: Fire Strengths: Very ...

Jared: "Easy, now!" i began backing up. "I don't make the lists!" "But you'd think, that me being the one who tells you everything, That'd I be higher than you! ...

Jared: "Well you see..." Honestly, i had known i was on the list, but only since maybe a month ago. I really didn't care. Actually, I thought it was really ...

Tess: Jared ran up to me. "tess, please try and tell Lee that we need to kill the rogues! They're dangerous, and will kill us." For once he looked completely ...

Thanks so much for introducing me! Elle: "My name is Isabelle Krator." I began. "I will be your Katana instructor. You should know, that I am the hardest teacher in ...

Jared: "You serious? You have no Idea who Davnick Tarish is?" I asked increduloously. Skylar and Elise shook their heads. I sighed. "He's a rogue that turns in his own ...