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(Aww, so cute!) Jared: "I'll be right back." I said. "Okay." Elise said. Our fingers untangled, and I walked into the crowd with a cold hand. I spied the booth ...

That sounds good! :D

Honestly, it's pretty hard to do anything wrong. I mean, as long as you don't outright insult people, you don't have to worry about it! :)

RayRay's pretty cute! Oh and Blondie, please do your best to irritate Tess! I love messing with her! It is so funny! :D

Holy cow! Those would all annoy Tess so much! But I think Tweety would bug the heck out of her! But it's your character who's picking the nicknames so, you ...

Hey, I just have a fast question and then we can get back to our plotting of destruction for our characters! Blondie, what is Sheara gonna call Tess? I can't ...

Sorry for how long it is! Okay, so, this chapter isn't going to make sense unless you read the one before it. Plaese reveiw! I'm not sure if I made ...

I liked it! The confusing-ness worked for me, actually, and the off-flow kind of flowed, if that makes sense. It made me laugh a little bit, because I got so ...

I liked it! You caught me at the begining, and then talk about a mood swing! And then you got really violent! I was like "Holy cow!"(Excuse my weird way ...

Okay, so I'm gonna start with stuff I didn't really like(which are few, by the way) so that my reveiw will end on a good note! The flow of the ...

This was really good! You did a really good job setting up an image in my head, and nice choice of words! The flow didn't really...flow...I guess. It still was ...

This was a really good poem! And for the record, I actually liked the flow! It was choppy, like thoughts, so it was kind of like reading somebody's mind. I ...

You know, Reva and Rayden would be really cute together! And maybe he could help her to get back on the right track and all. That would be so cute!

I really liked it Blue! The beggining was catching and was very good, but i didn't really get the end. The flow of the words didn't really work. But it ...

Hey Blue! I really liked this poem! It grabbed my attention very quickly, and you did a very good job with metaphors. The flow of the words was great, it ...