icanbefixed

Hey there! I'll review you :) So... First off, I have to say that I really liked what you've done here because I can relate, and that's what you want ...

I myself am one of those people who never cries. (I actually don't think I can.) So this really spoke to me because when I was little, I would cry ...

OH, this is sooo cute! I love how you make reality seem trivial there. I would love to have a lil fish island of my own, do you have any ...

I.. uh.... I'm speechless? I don't think that's the way to describe it, 'tis more like I'm-trying-to-log-off-but-need-the-reviews type of thing, if you know what I'm saying? Okay. I like this. ...

Why, I'm impressed. Good job. I love how you described it and I read this like a true poem. It flowed and I understood it to a point where it ...

Haha, it reminded me of my brother and my Texas History teacher mixed! :) I don't know how, but it did. Okay. I don't know how to review a doodle, ...

gotchya! I'll be sure to send a link. And there'll be links on here, too, before and after the story-- according to order of events for your convenience.

Oh, why thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I'll be sure to notify you when I post my next part. :)

Was this somehow connected to Alice in Wonderland? It seemed like it, to me... but then again, I am insane! :) Okay, I liked it. I think you got the ...

Your rhyming was consistent and your point was quite clear, that's all great. But... your rhythm was kind of weird. I know, it's a short poem and it shouldn't be ...

Great job. I think that this is almost there, but it still needs some emotional depth. I've been saying that a lot lately, but it's true. Poetry isn't poetry without ...

Hey, no fair! That's better than I could EVER do! I can't draw faces AT ALL! :) Okay, I agree with everyone else, his bottom arm is a little distorted. ...

Hey there! this poem needs a little more... how do I say it? ... Umph. It has the attitude, and you have the idea, but you don't have the right ...

Commas, commas! I agree with perdido. You don't need them all! :) Okay. I love what you're trying to do here, but I'm not sure you're getting it across. You ...

first of all, I have to ask: Is there a double meaning to this? Because it seems like it. If not for the title, and the little line at the ...