icanbefixed

Hey hey! One nitpick: ...trying to maneuver past a semi with an add for Walgreens on it. that needs to be 'ad' Okay! that's all. :) Loved loved loved the ...

hey, thanks Navita! I actually meant for this to be a more straightforward piece, as that was my emotion at the time is portrayed. Splayed, not exactly perfect, but very ...

Well Hello there. My name is Fixed. I think that, for a painting, it's better than I could do. But I still have pointers. Red: The neck is too thick. ...

I'm the one who's bright, who's always happy. I'm the one who's got something to say. In a classroom full of emptiness- I sit at the back, hand straight up, ...

SO CUTE! IT MADE ME CRY. I don't have anything to say, other than this really got to me and I love the way it was written. I hope you ...

Uh, no poem, please. It's cute and all, but you don't know her yet? So I'd suggest just making small talk until you're a little closer. Then, ask her out ...

OMG! *Noms* This is good. I like the concept. good job. until I stepped into them. This doesn't sound right. I would say something more like, "until I marched in ...

My dear, I see we've come to an invisible agreement. You keep your boundaries; I'll keep mine. Or so I thought. Now you've stepped in and you're taking my life, ...

Thanks! I was going for more of an innocence look to it.

At the very least, his parents (who had him arrested) must now pay his legal fees! Ha, oh, Irony... :/ poor kid. I mean. Yeah. We'll go with that. It's ...

I must say... this is good :) I don't have anything to ask or critique you on as you have already done everything possible to it. I love the piece ...

Too redundant. Sorry, but that's all I really have to say. To make the repetition work, you need more description, more emphasis on everything. Make me HURT like she does. ...

*Gasp!* I love it! Do you have more like this? If so, PM me when you post it! Because it's scrumdiddlyumptious! Okay. I think that detailing was good, it's one ...

Haha, I like it :) I like how you've described everything. Unfortunately, for me, this didn't have anything really to review because it was too short, but fortunately for you ...

My goodness! You've been hiding this? (jk I don't believe I know you... so "HI") I don't have anything other than that to say, I didn't catch any errors and ...