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A young girl hides a secret kiss behind her left ear-- she folds it in-- weaved between strands of hair. Passionate, late night kiss, found by the strong boy who ...

Hey! I liked this. Your rhythm was great and the sense of mystery was just kind of THERE. I definitely thought you had real imagery. Spots I liked: the shining ...

I: The chattering hallway ears charred by heated conversations it's crowded but I'm empty and barren, as is where I walk. There's me and the blanched tile, it's corroded by ...

I've found what no one else has: a human lifejacket. I know I love him-- maybe, but I've gone without him before. We were once something but it diminishes slower ...

hey, thanks! I definitely wanted it to be freestyle like that, because it reflected how I felt at the time. Very... spontaneous, I might say?

He plays guitar quietly across the line that separates us and connects us together at 4 a.m. I listen-- it's weird, because I'm not talking like I usually do non-stop. ...

Oh wow. This sounds like a really good movie!! When it does come out, feel free to tell me:) Now I'm no expert at scripts, so I'll just say this: ...

Thanks! I'll try to expand on it.

I'm watching him from behind a window. His smile fake to me I see the thoughts now that I didn't before. His mind an open barricade of plans-- he will ...

Hey! I love it! I have one nitpick. Take away my dread Take away my sorrow Take away my pain Take away my knowledge Here, it becomes redundant. So, instead ...

ehh.. I think I should tell the truth. I didn't like this much. The idea's great, but the writing's gone astray. Not all poetry has to rhyme. You either do, ...

A monster consumes eyes with a fiery hate. Instead of blood there is water, it's forced out-- gallons, a single tear. Fire spreads through a crowd in whispers that protrude ...

Silly boy. You make me smile and laugh but you don't see what's in front of you. My friends say it's obvious that it's there. I don't see it. It's ...

I've actually thought about this a lot. I've decided that it's The Book Thief by Markus Zusak. It has everything for me: great characters, an interesting plot that doesn't rely ...

Small, gray cloud innocent, slow. It sits and looks a sullen thing pitiful and sad. All alone, no friends. A small, gray cloud.