icanbefixed

Innocence found inside a girl who sat and gave her hair a twirl, with shining eyes the shade of May and tanned skin as warm as the day. Her canny ...

Fixed here! I'll be reviewing this. A world gone by is a world a world found new A change of time : is a change of Hope A decade, a ...

Thanks! I re-did it. I hope it's better. :)

The iPod is heavy in my hands the only source of light in a dead car that I sit in, bitterly, itching to revive it's engine. I watch minuscule raindrops ...

What a monster I've made of myself. I'm selfish: the guy I'm in love with, and have been, is thinking about killing himself, and I'm worried about him not talking ...

The crunch of dry grass echoes beneath the arches of my bare feet. I hold my stance and block off the angle of the closest forward watching him weave through ...

A man was suspected to be a criminal. The man supposedly took a baby from another man who was respected internationally while he was asleep. This suspected criminal took the ...

DUDE. WOW. Haha, I think you've probably summed up hope in a great little stanza. I mean. Yeah. If life turns gloomy, sad and dark; just keep hope to light ...

Wha.... umm... I'm speechless? The emotion portrayed in this is crazy! I absolutely LOVED it! I don't really think this could be counted as a review, but I'll try to ...

Hey ICBF…I need to think of a better nickname for you. *ponders* haha, thanks guys. Lily, other people call me "Fixed" if that works for you! Gracias for the review, ...

A constant rush of blood streams through her cheeks-- a heavy gush, making her face glow with emotion. She smiles and laughs hoping to hide the flush of color, but ...

I disagree with everyone else, I like #4 the most because it stands out to me. Although you had a theme going, I like how it has the same colors ...

I have oooonnnnee nitpick:) The old games sitting unused in my room, so you can play them like you never did with me, because you were always to tired from ...

Hey, Taco. Great poem, but you've got some rustiness still in there. It's a little... choppy. :) Once I was dead -- Now I'm Alive. I once was Sad. Now ...

EPIC! :) I love it. The rhythm was good, it sounded like you were reading it to me as I was drifting off to sleep. A nursery rhyme, only without ...