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Re: A Mountain of Hunger
It was perfectly blunt, and just like any good poem, after reading it twice I understood it perfectly. Once, to take in the rhythm, and the second to consume the ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Dear, Dave
This is very bitter. It fills me with sorrow, in a way, but makes me want to fight against this sick person. Whoo! There's so much emotion in this piece, ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Running From Death
Wooow! This doesn't seem like death to me as much as it does insanity... but in the end, they're the same thing, aren't they? Ah, I've done a couple pieces ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: The Greatest View
The hardest mountain to climb will have the greatest view. Everything's at a different angle: memories serve as double vision, a sight from the valleys as well as the precipice. ...
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: Burden
What is one supposed to say If unsure of being drawn in But scared of pulling away? Such pain, such striking light love brings That leaves you slightly blinded As ...
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: Holding Me Back
Not all romances end with happily ever after. He acts nonchalant-- "No, there's nothing wrong. We're simply over. Done. Tossed in the garbage," he says. "Did I love her? ...Well," ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Reflection
Really? Is this who I think it's about?:/ It's a beautiful piece. But. Um.
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: The Great Space Panda
Kilo, this made my day(:
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: To Make the Earth Smile
The feeling of helplessness I posess is unknown to the average human. Such a feeling, one can not compose from rationality, nor complete insanity, but a mixture of both. This ...
Dec 18, 2010 -
Re: The Power of Pop Secret
OH MY GOD I WANT MORE:D Tay it's amazing. I want more. and I want popcorn now. I don't have any problems at all with this:). at ALL. yaay! tell ...
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Cow!
This is late, but I was looking through your portfolio and I saw this. I just wanted to say the cow looks mad:) it's a cute mad, though. haha!
Nov 12, 2010 -
Re: Dancing Away The Night
Hey there, Tigersprite. I love the idea of this poem. It's kind of like a hershey's kiss. You just get a little taste of what you want, you know? But... ...
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: Tastes of Defeat
Defeat: A bitter, twangy substance that sticks to the roof of my mouth and makes it feel dry, like I never fulfilled my thirst-- I lost. I lick my lips ...
Sep 4, 2010 -
Re: All is Calm
All is calm. Moonlight shines a motherly comfort, preening the iridescent water as the ocean rolls in it's bed. Saltwater sheets drift over the sand, constellations a complex mobile in ...
Sep 4, 2010 -
Re: Infinity
Infinity: Hugging every single star in the universe in one giant grip --squeeze-- and then kissing their foreheads good morning. Hinting a single smile to the one you love sending ...
Jul 31, 2010
