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Here's my picture. If it doesn't load... blech. 'Romance'

Thx youhs. Yeah, i showed this to a couple of adults and they said the same things about the stanzas and stuff, :P

Okay, I just finished reading every single chapter from start to here. Now I'm sad there's nothing else to read! You had me enveloped in the story, on the insect's ...

a m a z i n g. that's just it. You're fourteen and you write like you've been doing it for y e a r s. It's beautiful!! Thank you ...

Great job!! I was hooked!! i think you should write more!! (sorry, that's what i always say, trust me ik i've been typing it but it's TRUE) I know i ...

thanks! yeah, the funny thing is in real life, i named my truck clyde... lol

Hey, jessabelle, it's really good. I have my own guardian angel... so that poem made me smile. I think if you just fixed the "their" and made it "there" towards ...

I, my, me, I, my, me.... That's the only thing that I had wrong with this. I love the whole idea, I thought the storyline was great! But, I lost ...

Let's see... where did I leave off..? Oh yes... btw when "I" refer to something as "she", "I'm" talking about "my sweet truck", which happens to be a very big ...

... whoa... :thud: That was... awesome. I loved it. You deserve a... dancing elephant. here, take this one => :elephant: I loved it, but i was a little confused when ...

The voice pierced my ears again. "Hey, kid," the voice said. Hmm... male.. I thought. I opened my eyes, and turned towards the sound. He was a boy, around fifteen, ...

thanks guys! I'll have something up soon.

ummhhh... I only talk about winter once in this poem, please clarify so I can work on it? I love that you're correcting me, I need it, but please tell ...

yes, it happens to me. With what i wear, lol. I'll be wearing green and my eyes turn a really pretty blue. also, this happens with my mood. if i'm ...

Lifeless cars rested on the sides of the roads, snow-covered and cold. All of them were dark and made me shiver, but i could never turn myself away. One after ...