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You know you're a nerd when someone calls you one. Just kidding! You know you're a REAL nerd when you are famous on the internet for having the highest scores ...

:smt024 Hey, Amy! I'm not one for photos, but I'll try my best at reviewing what I can. Hope it helps, and I don't totally slash your style. :) ...numbering ...

hah, I find this as.. Clever. :) There's actually a poem quite like this, if you've ever heard of the books "Take me out of the bathtub"? Well.. criticism time... ...

Beast. That's the word I'm going to use to describe this. I laugh. :smt040

:smt023 Love it! Professional, almost.

Preface: I sit at my desk, fingers typing fast. Why I'm typing, I don't know, I really have no idea what to talk about on my blog for the day. ...

haha, Lydia, it's not "four words", for a thought you had me thinking I had a blonde moment. The title is "four letters", I beleive. :)

:thud: (gasp) I loved it!!!!! :smt024 Cheeseballs, I was almost frightened by your superiority in poetry to me. My mind is blown. Here is my *attempt* at criticizing whatever I ...

Lips of blue and yellow, cups of nectar sweet; standing on green stilts, blooming with intensity. Lovely and powerful, they stand in the rain, collecting the water; beauty in nature's ...

:smt024 Hey! I loved your poem, but I don't think you had enough rhythm. I suppose that's how it's supposed to be, but the stanza is more like a paragraph, ...

Love. A word that is strong. Hate. A word that is thrown. Fear. A word that is dead. Best. A word that is only. Rest. A word that is slept. ...

Thank you! And yes, I know it's in the wrong classification. I wanted to see how many people said that! :elephant:

I understand your pain, after reading my last post, this should feel like a rather great gain. I'm informing you now, for the bravest of us all, I still will ...

:smt024 It was great, really. I guess I should review it... I should warn you, I'm in a rambunctious mood and wish to show it, so if you don't understand ...

Thanks everyone for the criticism! To tell the truth, this is a second body of a piece I had made earlier in the year. I was *kind of* trying to ...