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Interesting. Near the end of the poem, you wrote, "Maybe someday he'll open my eyes." Did you mean to say "his eyes" or is this talking about a revalation? haha, ...

Awh, Ellie, you beat me to him! *Kilo... she's no fun ;)* Haha... Love you Ellie

I will review :) Don't take anything bad.. Just go along carefully next time. This is all in good spirits

Okay, this needs a little help. Tear it up! A small hand, Holding Daddy's tight As they cross the street. The trust the hand projects Makes him want to tear ...

haha you won't believe this but I actually was inspired to write this after reading 'The Highwayman'! the moonlight, in the moonlight, in the moonlight...

Granted, but now everyone thinks too much of you and you are writing so much that it's sickening. I wish I could explain my ideas better.

...exactly... lol

Bonnie walked in front of all the chaos and pushed the off button. A beeping sound erupted from her dog and Bella stared a hole through Bonnie's head. Then, the ...

All over the skies are filled with dew stricken winds that slap my face with icy bitterness. Your eyes flash with by passing street lights; dazzling as they are regularly ...

Can I have the muffin?1 I'm hungry anyways...:) :smt024 Okay, well, Fixed here! I shall review... One fine day in Obscene Slipper Land, the land of sharp pointy cliffs and ...

:elephant: Okay, I've changed them, just for you. Here's the excerpts from the part you wanted changed: I cut myself off. Something told me, in the back of my mind, ...

:smt024 Fixed here! I shall attempt to review... this thing you call 'fail' desolation to hiss. "to hiss" made me stop for a second. I was like, "wait, what?" Change ...

I forced myself to walk towards the utility room one step at a time in front of a crowd that looked partially human... but I wasn't going to judge them. ...

If that's where it will be seen, do with it what you want.

Thank youh!! :elephant: Your post made my day. XD