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Re: Were She Not So Beautiful
Wow. This is... amazing. *feels like Paula Abdul* You're writing is great, I love how you really let me see the thoughts in your head. I'm very vague in my ...
Mar 4, 2010 -
Re: Lies
I live a lie - a constant dream, a hope of something daftly supreme. Some day I will see it again, the truth that held me in the wind. A ...
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: Free Hugs!
HUGS?! Where?! I want one! GROUP HUG!
Feb 27, 2010 -
Re: Dreams Of Love
I don't want to bash anything on this! *glances* Just read through it out loud and make sure all of the commas are correctly placed. If you're pausing mid-sentence, it ...
Feb 27, 2010 -
Re: Antidi... ant... antidises... oh whatever!
Antidisesta- blishmentarianist, a pointless but long noun.
Feb 25, 2010 -
Re: TankMan
I'm jealous! You caught this moment beautifully! But... didn't the other man... get squished? Okay. I my crying became weeping as the man followed it's path, blocking it again. Aha! ...
Feb 21, 2010 -
Re: This isn't the best: You'll never know
This poem should be a song! :) all you need is a nice guitar and a drum beat. Instant epicness. Hey, I'm Fixed. I'll be reviewing you today. First, I ...
Feb 21, 2010 -
Re: Ode to Kamas
I think I'll leave Kamas to do the review... But thanks for sharing! You're rhyming scheme made it very hearfelt. Love, Fixed :smt027
Feb 21, 2010 -
Re: Just some artwork
how... What... You're amazing... I'm speechless. I have NO criticism, but I'd love to see the whole photo of the painting that was too big to scan. Puuh-lease! Love, Fixed ...
Feb 20, 2010 -
Re: No Name Yet!!!! (needs one real bad!)
Vast!! So... predatory? Nah.. threatening. Kilo, I loves your writing. I already reviewed this on your other profile. Lol. Love, Fixed :smt027
Feb 19, 2010 -
Re: Happyness
Dang, child!!!! I'm jealous.. You're waay too good :P I don't have anything to say, really, it's amazing. Other than the apostrophes in "can't", there's nothing wrong with it. Oh, ...
Feb 18, 2010 -
Re: You know you're a writer when...
You know you're a writer when you think of hooks for waking up every morning. (for example, "I wouldn't have woke up, except for the fact that there was an ...
Feb 18, 2010 -
Re: Breathe
"Breathe, Bonnie," Oh yeah, air. I let myself inhale; ecstasy at last. Somehow forgotten and freakishly foreign, the air's redemption is my reminder. I had a promise broken, it's pieces ...
Feb 18, 2010 -
Re: pressure
Nice poem, chief. I don't really have anything to say... yet another one of your poems brought me on the verge of tears. Good ones, though, because you're succeeding at ...
Feb 18, 2010 -
Re: Ode to Sare Agama
We were in chat, and I decided to write in haikus... This is something I spun up, quickly and talented-ly. (lol) I think Sare's a beast, we all know it's ...
Feb 17, 2010
