icanbefixed

thank you! ;) I was supposed to be doing my spanish homework instead of writing poems, thus, I wrote my poem in spanish.. don't you love being side-tracked?

'tis all a dream, my sweet :) lol... these people are a little weird, but you gotta love that. Welcome to YWS. I'm fixed. :arrow: :smt027 that's me, the ninja ...

You get... your mom. - inserts a quarter with the state of Texas on it -

'Tis the Lone-Star State that I love so, and I'm not one to speak, but this Lone-Star State that I speak of doesn't have consistency. 'Twas yesterday, I reckon so, ...

I agree. I've been told I'm very vague in what I write, which to me is a good thing. A lot of times I write it to get the point ...

this is work of a higher being. *likes* I don't have anything to say about it! Thanks for showing :) Love, Fixed :smt027

Oh, wow! You just decided to conjure this out of nowhere? (BY the way, I'm Fixed, I'll be reviewing you.) Okay. First thing's first, you're telling a story, so this ...

It certainly is a poem, but it's more like a Shel Silverstein poem or something. (Not that I've read much of her.) Bahaha, I'm pretty sure Shel Silverstein is male... ...

Why, thank you everyone! I've tried to switch it up a little to fix everyone's desires... is it any better?

It's lovely, but.. what's the square-lookin' thingie up in the center?

Hey, call me Fixed. I'll be your reviewer today. :smt024 People think they're sincere Fake is all I see and hear The rhythm is weird in that second line... I ...

I'm not really sure what this is, but it's hitting me hard on the chest, not even heeding my cries. Tearing me up, this one little feeling, one little doubt ...

thanks, ben! Yeah. it's one of those poems where I just sat down (with a friend in the room) and started writing. she sat there staring at me for half ...

My writing, so vague, it catches the eye a small but clearly written lie- its heart cold and barren white, the master of false alibi. A cactus sitting in the ...

There are a few word mistakes I caught, but those can be fixed. haha, since my name is icanbefixed, ... :D I thought that was funny.