icanbefixed

Hey there! Lovely works of art you've got going there. I'd like to say that I agree with DayDreams, the second one does look a heck of a lot like ...

Hey! I can tell you worked very hard on this poem. It's well shaped and the idea is certainly developed. You put in good rhyming and had me in on ...

This is good... :) Hey! I'm Fixed, and I'm here to fix your poem! ;) *see what I did there? hhahaha ;)* Your imagery was good, your detailing, too... now ...

Oh, dear! I might just have to review this, shan't I? *I don't make any sense talking like that* Hey! It's Fixed, here! :) I must say, you've done a ...

*likes* *wants more*

Hey, I'm Fixed. I'll review this tonight. First of all, I would like to say that your description kind of had a crescendo there, towards the end. I sat for ...

I'm going to be brutally honest... it's cliche. I started reading this and automatically went into auto-pilot, just kind of rolling with it. But then I couldn't even do that. ...

Okay. Thanks! Oh.. for the background information, I have an intro. If that doesn't help any, please PM me. I'll be sure to add it in soon!

Intro: My eyes cracked open. Even though I was sweating beads, a chill ran through me with the power of winter gusts. I shivered. A feverish feeling swept the last ...

Thanks! Yeah, I'll post more up (longer) soon. This was just the intro.

Oh dear goodness! I love this! It's repetitive, but not redundant, if that makes sense. The emotion is perfect. That's all I have to say. It's good. Love, Fixed :smt027

Oh. My. God. I was COMPLETELY captivated the whole time. I loved every minute of it. It was perfectly spread, making my emotions sway not unlike reeds in your descriptive ...

Hello. I don't believe I caught the best part of your poem. It would please me if you went through and checked that it was readable. I absolutely loved how ...

INTRO Ferocity lashed out through my nerves. I desperately tried to escape from the grasping hands that cut me out of the air. Cold, malicious fingers dug into my arms, ...

Wow... I'm left speechless. This is really good. I'm glad that you put it on here, deafwriter. I want more. I've found that I was practically blinded to what you ...