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The girl left her home right? but from who? sorry but I cant figure it out. I liked this poem, I am just confused "who is she running away from?" ...

Hi there ! I am sure you'll enjoy every bit of YWS as I enjoy it.. ! :) Im looking forward for your stories =) by the way what do ...

I have noticed your use of then as than... but anyway a good short story :) You have shown the different sides of the writer to every person she writes. ...

And you hate it, you hate being responsible for other people. But you do it anyway, you do everything with a smile on your face and you never let any ...

Its temporary guys, I just want to be reviewed. Just constructive criticisms okay? The time has come when Lois should leave Hecrenesia. He has no power to display at the ...

MY FAVORITE SOOOO FAR ! My first time to read romance here at YWS and I really loved it... I can feel the longing of the speaker, ! It's so ...

A a quartet ? Im I right? I felt your pain. It is night time here and it is a nice poem to read now. I cant go to sleep ...

It was very GOOD ! I just have read only 1/4 of it but I already loved it. My eyes were hurting so I have to stop reading on the ...

Well uhm the first part before the part which has a date in it is interesting, strong and Solid... Thats just for me, I didnt finish it though. She began ...

Content wise, it was pretty good. I am nervous all through out the story.. I have noticed this I was cut off by the sounds of heaving breathing and what ...

I liked this one. I am not going to review technically since I am a newbie. I felt the emotions you want to imply. I just wonder why does the ...

I discovered YWS thru google. First I am a member of but I find it quite difficult to navigate and manage the site so I searched again. Then, I became ...

Hi Agatha :D We are both new here and I am not American also so I am sure that I will make many mistakes in my stories. But well, thats ...

This is the first essay I have encountered here. I'm laughin with all the comments haha, Im sorry with that. Anyway, as many other say, some words which is totally ...

Everybody here review so good. haha. Im now afraid to post my story =)