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Re: Two Hearts Apart (part 1)
WOW ! I love how you open your story. It caught my attention. I love this one, I enjoyed reading it ! And you are so good, I hope I ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: I'm new here
Yes you will learn much from US ! hehe... WELCOME jenjen :) I'm excited to read what you will write in the future! Don't be afraid, we DONT BITE ! ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Characters in my next novel =)
You GOT it right !. I am excited to write this one but first, I need to finish my first novel. Can you review it? My drawing skill is much ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Mountain Journey
I am very interested with this short story. Content Wise it was very good ! However I do agree with larztheloser I feel the need to criticize a few aspects ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: I do believe in commas. I do, I do.
Hi there! We are both Filipinos
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Characters in my next novel =)
And by the way the first two male characters supposed to be twins.! The next story I am about to post is about the twins :)
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Characters in my next novel =)
haha lol ! They are not the characters in my Reomi novel I have posted here on YWS. They will be on my next one. :) I am glad you ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Characters in my next novel =)
This was supposed to be my characters in my next novel. Hope you'll like it :) anime.jpg
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Dear Paper
D'awww, this was so cute. Awkward and sweet and incredibly nervous. I like. tape/glue Mm, I don't really like that slash in there. It just feels too, I dunno, technical ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Emily's Ways
Okay, it was alright for me. and this definit e ly didn't feel right ahm... do we always need mirrors to describe the main character's appearance? hehe... Interesting.Interesting.
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Intoxicating: Chapter One: Part One
For me,all throughout the story I am confused if Riley is a girl or a boy. The name suggest a male character right? But I also think and I need ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: The Night King Chapter I-partI
My first review of the day ! [I will not review this grammar wise. You're better than I am. :) ] The night King... yes,for me it was too long ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Reomi: Prologue [new]
Thanks for your wonderful review! I told you, I cant express myself in English medium. I am also not a good English writer... Yes, you have a few grammar problems, ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Reomi: Prologue [new]
Im new here. And I am also new in writing. I am a Filipino who wanted to write a fantasy novel in English. Fantasy is not well loved by Filipinos ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Ice Ambassadors: Chapter 1 (Edits!)
Interesting story ! I wanted to read the next chapter. Many questions were left in my mind. Like what does the 2 child look like? The new country? Oh ! ...
May 30, 2011