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Welcome to YWS !!! Oh, writing for about seven years? Cool ! If you have questions, feel free to PM me :) Im looking forward to read your work ;)

A huh ... I think you had separated this one from your novel, when you are going to post a part of your novel there should be a blue dialog ...

Thank you very much! It's going to help me a lot on my latest work ! :) I hope I can apply what I have learned!

Interesting story, so your main character will be the daughter right? Hmmm... It is too short even for a prologue, but nice it is interesting :) It has potential to ...

Oh! I'm very touched that you wrote for your dog. And with that being said, I think that with this piece, you put strong emotions... I'm in tears even though ...

SO cute! I cant believe you were 5 when you wrote this? I cant even hold a pen at that age ! haha... anyway, this is good and super cute ...

My mind became too crowded with all the descriptions given. I cant imagine the place and the situations very clear, just in my opinion or maybe my mind was already ...

I love this poem! I was like singing the part " I dont wanna wear my pants anymore, I dont wanna wear my pants anymore!" It is so hilarious! That ...

My Review: The story truly happens in real life. But this was quite a cliche. i already had a scholarship for Harvard and on top of that i was the ...

Ok so here is the part 2... A god saved me? What the heck does that mean? Did I actually die then? Should I be with Aiden right now? Oh ...

Hey I love this one ! One of my favorites! You think it is boring? I WILL SAY A BIG NO !!! The story is very interesting, some kind of ...

I can feel the dismay of the speaker about failure. Well actually, I can relate to your poem. I had faced many failures in my life and... and... Anyway, Just ...

I liked this poem... but I agree with this one It is raining Steady and consistent I am alone Safe and consistent- It is distracting and takes away from the ...

I'm an artist not a photographer... haha :) But the plan sounds good. haha... I think I can capture some good shots so I'm also in!

Ok in the first part I said that I am confused if Riley is a girl or a boy. Now I know that she s Female ;) lol haha, by ...