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There were plenty of errors here in this story. First, your CAPITALIZATION. I marked it with pink , it includes the names and the beginning of the sentence and paragraphs. ...

Hey I like this poem... The mystery, the use of words and everything... I just have a question, did you intentionally did not separate this poem into stanzas? Well for ...

During the whole time I am reading this, I am laughing! Hahahahahahahahahahahaha.... (that's not enough)... That is not a bad sign nor a good sign, I dony know, hehe... (I'm ...

@jenmarie You never knew! You just want NED NED NED or RALPH RALPH RALPH! I was never discovered! Anyway, I am just good at sketching... I am not good in ...

Interesting... Elementals, some kind of a cliche eh? But I was also writing about one so that's okay :) Nitpicks: In the beginning , the four elements clashed and battled ...

Ow a nice topic to tackle ! I also had an experience like that when in my dream I already woke up but the truth was I am still trapped ...

Hi AshKhan ! Welcome to YWS ! :D I've discovered recently that I have the sensitivity required for writing Wow that's good for yoU! By the way what do you ...

Nightshift... Interesting title... It fitted your interesting and mysterious story. I will leave the "nitpick" part to others, but story wise, it left me questioning, who is Gron? What are ...

Welcome to YWS Samp ! I also love fantasy! I read and write one... I'm looking forward to read your work :) GodBless !

Wow Jen, composer? haha... Super sweet song! I want to hear it ok? And by the way, who will not cry if he received a song composed by the one ...

WHOOOSH ! I really love this novel... There were so many secrets! I have nothing else to say! Great Job... I hope the next post will be chapter 2 and ...

FUN SONG ! Spongebob's song! I liked how you put your own thing there... I am singing it with Spongebob's tune... Well it is true! I hate writer's block and ...

Hey, you held my attention up to the last word of this composition! Normally, just few boring lines made me skip reviewing it. And you just held my attention that ...

Yey ! The part two!... It is not boring ! Very interesting and I want to read some more! The clergy man's personality was shown well. I think I should ...

Nice shots ! There is nothing I can criticize about your work! And by the way your title caught my attention, with Philipines included in it... Yeah, this site is ...