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We go together like shotguns and regret, sitting in the shadows playing Russian Roulette. We go together like bitter hate and fire, cause and effect: the dialect of your desire. ...

Uhh... I don't get it. What was it about and why was it so short?

I'm pretty amazed, seeing as things rarely make me physically shudder when I'm reading them. And I didn't even notice the lack of capitalization (don't worry about that though, it's ...

Hmm... The lion thing was kind of strange, in my opinion. Also, the repetition of "he's so gorgeous" annoyed me a bit, but what's worse is the cliche of the ...

>.< I hate acrostic poems, so maybe it's not fair for me to critique this. But it seemed kind of short... and, don't take this the wrong way, but it ...

Wow. That was absolutely beautiful. Your metaphors were really great and I particularly admired this line: "A herd of guilt gallops into a field of thoughts". Very original. Quippie likey! ...

That's incredible! I wish I could paint like that >_

This was really good. The emotions run strong throughout it... it even kind of made me sick inside (in a good way ;)). Conventions: You see a smile on my ...

Lmao! Headless=my favorite :D Also, I think you may be surpressing some feelings that you need to get out, quick, before you kill someone! ^_-

Awwww :] They remind me of back in the day when the other second graders envied my sweet drawing skills... don't take that the wrong way, I just mean it ...

W inter whispered sweet hellos, seraphim in perfect tune sang a chorus like a dream, nocturne of a silver moon. I n the darkest depths of night, ghostly crystals kissed ...

I loved this! There were a couple of typos that made me go "huh?" "My prince will come on his shiny white house" should be "My prince will come on ...

Gah! Did you have to ruin the whole thing with the title "Halloween"?! *grumbles* I loved the content, and I almost didn't read it because of the name... well, what ...

*sigh* I really hate it when people make "I" lowercase, so please fix that. Also... "Guess it's a tie between you and Paul"? Well that's just great, unless my name ...

Firstly, let me say I loved it. Your imagery makes me feel as though I have actually been to San Fransico (I haven't) and it makes me feel like buying ...