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I really liked this poem, but... for some reason, the last sentence seems like a weakness, in my opinion. I think it's the way you used "sometimes I think" twice ...

The day is young, The tulips sprung, Bright and colorful they are; Like patches of Mother earth's love, For she is never far. The warm, sweet night Sings lullabies To ...

The highway is a blur, rain-washed marker on a paper one shade lighter than the road itself. The hum of life is surprising to find in such a dead city, ...

Let me ask you this, my dear: Would you let me fall Into the dark and fade away? Would you care at all? Would you call out, Scream, or shout? ...

I liked how the title was longer than the actual poem. :)

Falling Down forever, it seems No way out and no way to return. Spinning Into hallowed nowheres Like love for nobody, like concern. Dreaming Of another world apart, Of silent ...

The snow fell down upon our town, Silence in its path. It left its mark on darkened hearts, Consumed up in its wrath. The memories all washed away Of children ...

If I could make the world as beautiful as you, I'd write the whole world over, Make the skies a bluer blue. There would be no more hatred, No visions ...