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Re: The Villain
Thank you. I didn't put a lot of dialogue because my English teacher says i use too much. But thank you soooo much for the criticism!
May 5, 2015 -
Re: The Villain
Omg thanks so much!
May 4, 2015 -
Re: The Villain
PS thanks!!!
May 4, 2015 -
Re: The Villain
Actually, this isn't real. Sorry for the misunderstanding
May 4, 2015 -
Re: For My Family I Would Be -edited
I think it's actually quite good
May 4, 2015