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Well.... You've got talent better than me,I'll give ya that. But,ah,well,that's not gonna win you anyawards. A bit amatur. The Car Pic- I can see where you're going,but it needs ...

Watch this!!! You'll Luv IT!!! arn't they cute??? :) :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D ...

A bit short. Try finding out more. Check the library,encyclopedia,Computer,etc. Otherwise,It's pretty good. :D

I liked it. Also,you forgot Buffy The Vampire Slayer.She can kill Edward(Team Jacob). :) Just sayin'.

I agree with the above reviewer. Also,you are indeed very brave. I couldn't live with that,because I have Obsessive Compulsive Disorder and also Hypochondria(Fear of Bad would freak me out. ...

That was beautiful,in a way. The innocence of the world obliterated. Sad,really. As you said, " What a shame there’s no innocence left in the world..."

I know, Like I said this is a rough draft. Also.this is an OLD rough draft. My newer draft is an a pink binder. Maybe I should post the contents ...

Mmmm... I'm sitting in front of the computer,eating brownie batter..... Thay was soooo funny! Even for me,the diehard Twilight Fan. Poor Nate. edward and Bella should go to heck. Team ...

Name Kiarra Maylin Age 12 Sign Scorpio Ability Can cause major pain or death when she stings you with a retractable stinger growing from her HAND. Appearance History Always had ...

I find trying to describe random objects help. example:A yellow rug It was a weather worn rug.Yellow with patches of dirt,it had been in that house for a long time. ...

I see. I get your point. Will try to edit again. Thanks for the rewiew.

'Guys,"Said Remus Lupin,"I have something to tell." "What?" they asked. "Well..." He hesitated for a moment before proceeding."I'm a werewolf." "Knew it,"murmured Sirius,while James and Peter stared a

I'm soo sorry. This is my first time writing a story. I'll try to fix it. Thanks.

Oh,I love,love,loved it! Sad,though,right? But,I agree,you need to show a bit more emotion. You could be the next Stephenie Meyer,though!

Chapter 1-The Fateful Day Yo.The name's Zach,Zachary Mortimer Windel.This is my story.I used to have a perfect-or as close to perfect as possible-life.I had a family,a good education,even a friend ...