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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Find My Way To You

    I am really impressed that this is your first story, you have a way of describing things that make me feel I am there. I could tell you of your ...

    Nov 1, 2007
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Something Out There

    Kim I can honestly say that your story kept me wanting to read more. You are doing very well. My advice would be to avoid the extra had, that, have ...

    Oct 29, 2007


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