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Well. This sounds very interesting and the wording dragged me in like honey to flies! This could make a great introduction and/or proluge and it would be considered a flawless ...

This was pretty good. Most of the time people write fiction, they cannot smoosh perfectly on the story line but you did it flawlessly. I can easily imagine Dally and ...

Very well written! This is an instant 100 out of 100! A++! I got to know Satin's attitude very well. This chapter reminded me of the beginning of The Clique ...

This piece was very humorous. It was also real. It was an ideal example on how a young child's mind works. I am a babysitter so I spend much time ...

Daniel "Are you sure we should do this?" asked Alice sheepishly. "Relax, Al, it's not gonna work anyway" I reassured her. But I was scared too. If this worked, what ...

This story was okay. You got all the necessary details, and you were able to make me aware of all the action. But the trouble is, I just can't understand ...

This story was good, but you need to rewrite some of the sentences. You really should continue this piece. She sounds like a middle child, lost between her brothers and ...

Wow! That was really messed up! This story was very funny, unpredictable, very demented, and pretty good. But what happens between Charming and Cinderella? Well, anyway, keep up the good ...

This was pretty funny. :) It ended a little to quickly though. You should continue this story. keep up the good work!

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