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hmmm, iv already told you that i like it........ here we go Tuckz I like it :D though i have a feeling im going to like the next chapter better........ ...

Wow, i never knew that, this is something so different and unique. I really like this, its so new and fresh!!! I really love the way you describe everything about ...

Wow, i don't actually know what the story is about, but i love the aggression in the image, his jaws are so taut you can tell that he is about ...

Hello Again Noelle okay so i came back as promised. Like Adriana mentioned you used the word window a little too much at the top, but otherwise it was good. ...

YAY i love this!!!!! its amazing and i want more!!!!! write quickly. I have nothing to say against what you just wrote, and its torture waiting for more!!! Oh dear ...

Wow you should really keep this as a novel, i mean i dont really know where its leading up to but i really like it so far. You have a ...

Aw i really loved the ending, it made me smile :D The repetition gets a little too much, but other than that i really liked it. And your poem really ...

wow i have read all of the parts so far, your actually quiet good, apart from your grammar mistakes here and there i think its a very nice story. I ...

Oh my God!!!!!! its beautiful really i loved it so much. I loved the ending part. I love the way you work from the top at such a calm peaceful ...

Ahh i love it TUCK!!!!!!!!!! don't stop writing... and i will wait for the rest... i want it first. Oh and i didn't do anymore editing, because i think no ...

Heya Tuckz :D Okay i cant believe your doing this but its awesome all the same. you make me proud. While strolling around the museum Jacque had started up a ...

AWWWWWWWWWWW that was the most heart-felt and adorable poem i have ever read... so far :D I loved every single piece of it, seriously amazing. :D SEE you should have ...

:D i loved them!!! :D I loved the man and i thought the bear cant beat it.... and them whoa its amazing!!! its not too detailed, but its just enough... ...

Hello :D Wow that is a veryyyy long poem (: Its nice in the way that you described what was passing by you, but really (no hard feelings please) i ...

Hello NaRachel :D I liked this poem especially at the beginning, at some places it rhymed and the others not so much, i think this poem would actually be awesome ...