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Re: Fall on the Verge of Falling
Wow you r an amazing artist, you should fill that will color it will be all the more amazing yet if your more like me and prefer your artwork black ...
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Re: Crying - An Acrylic Painting
its a very beautiful painting. but i think you might want to you a little more color. I love the background on the top left hand corner, around the girl ...
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Re: Chase - Part 1 / Chapter One: Zephyr
You know what you should get this published. I love the beginning, the way you talk about the thunder (maybe you should have described the beauty of it a little ...
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Re: Wishes and Fishes
awww thats such a nyc short as poem.
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Re: Country by the Sea
whoa that is one hell of a story. Its awesome, your really talented mashallah, you should consider writing for a career i have to remind myself that its not a ...
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Re: The Hunting Dog - Chapter 1
I liked you first chapter alot.... well i like anything to read... but this, this story pulls me back so far.... well the first chapter does so far... keep writing ...
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Re: Dylan
wow thank you creativityrules. I know what you mean, and i know you are right. But let me explain, this is not a start of a story it is actually ...
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Re: Shock of the Rose Killer (Prologue and Chapter 1)
Wow that was nice!!! i have a friend whom i want to join, she wrote a short story on a murder its very similar... well the beginning.(riddle) except in hers ...
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Re: Dylan
I entered the dark and dirty room. It was very eerie being there alone, it smelt like unoccupied space, the air was so musty and thick you could hardly breathe. ...
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Re: Trouble, My Favorite (Chapter 5-8)
Its a nice story and im sure that if you complete it and send it to an editor you will be able to make your dream come true. You could ...
Nov 27, 2011
