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Re: Atlantis Wonders part 1
bare with me please i wrote this two years ago About Me When I was a child my parents both died in a car accident. I am now 14 years ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: Atlantis Wonders
About Me When I was a child my parents both died in a car accident. I am now 14 years old, I was 3 years old when prior the my ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: Unhappy almost 15 (part 2)
Yikes its awesome, but harsh dont you think... hey dont you think it happened for a reason... look into yourself for a few moments really sit and think... were you ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: Fire and Shadow: Chapter 1 part 1
im sure you hear this from many people but you are the most talented writer i have meet as concerns to novel writing. :D your writing is really and truly ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: Tombstone Wings
thats creepy yet nicely put at the same time..... i cant even see something wrong with it :( :D your good at writing. I especially love the first two paragraphs. ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: Winter Bloom
I loved it... Its so simple but each word holds the weight of the other, Its a beautiful poem. I love the way everyone here is so good at writing. ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: Not an ordinary life 1
Hey, The beginning of your story is good but i think you might want to start with more of a pulling line. Something which makes the reader want to read. ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: Never Say Neverland Ever Again- Chapter 3
hello Noelle, Its nice though its actually not the beginning and i haven't seen the beginning yet. This reminds alot of The film that was made of Peter Pan. Its ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: Heart-To-Heart
Aw that was a very nice poem. Maybe you should add the part of it actually being two people at the beginning :D Its very nice. :D
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: CinderAllen. Chapter 2.
GRRRRR i love this but you deleted the other parts :( my heart is breaking I really like the way you write, but maybe before you start on chapter two ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: CinderAllen. Chapter 1.
Oh my don't stop its perfect except for a few mistakes here let me see. She add half to her self I think you need to clarify this i took ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: Cloud Dreams
oh god your words are wrenching my insides. how in the world did you manage to get under my skin. Please don't stop, your a brain box sir!!! :D could ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: Sam Higgins - Pencil/Charcoal Drawing
wow that's is a very impressive and detailed sketch :D That's good you should like it, its your work. :D You should go to an art institute
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: Unhappy almost 15 (part 1)
hey pencil girl :D I really liked the first entry of your diary, its very much like reading from a book. But i will admit i got a little lost ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: Nature
Your pictures are very beautiful, and i agree i was confused with the tree :D You seem to love photography you should try photography of things that people usually do ...
Nov 27, 2011