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thanks i guess that would make sense. but she told us before hand dont get to fancy if you are writting from a young perspective. i guess i just didnt ...

“Your mother at the moment is still in a coma, we expect a wakening in a few days." awakening is one word. You did really good, but im still not ...

"Harry Potter said it was wet." I recommend taking this out to make your story even better. I really like it. Its cute yet funny. I think i like it ...

i like it alot. very funny and it sounds like something that would happen to me. =] i would just recommend taking out the sentence about harry potter to make ...

i thought that i did well considering the memory for the memoir had to be from a childhood home in the 2nd grade or younger. My English teacher gave me ...