housecat

Although I'm not a fan of Justin, I have to admit, this is pretty strange and somewhat demented. But mostly strange. I highly recommend that you get some counselling.

There's nothing I would recommended for this because I actually think it's fine the way it is. The rhythm gets a little strange but thats actually one of the things ...

I think it makes perfect sense, but it's simply a little cliche'. I also think you should make the meaning a little clearer. I understand that some people like the ...

I don't really think that there's anything wrong with this story. It really touched my heart and gave me chills. I like how you described Lucy and her background as ...

So I'm assuming that this is possibly about your parents fighting, or abusing you. I like the way it was worded, but there are a couple errors. As she screams ...

Before you post something, it's best that you check your grammar. Boolovesyou already pointed that out thought. She walks down the street Filled with loops and curves Smiling at everyone ...

My oh my, we have some amazing imagery here. You have talent. The only thing that personally bothers me is the lack of emotion. Every poem should make you feel, ...