housecat

This is an AMAZING poem, and I can't think of anything to critique. I loved the topic and I also loved the vibe. Anger. Confidence (Towards the end). Although there ...

I like this the way it is, it's beautiful. I just wanted to say that this poem made me crave hot cocoa, and we don't have any milk. So that ...

Just the other day in English, We had to watch this documentary called " Louder than a bomb." It's about this poetry slam competition-like thing in Chicago. Teams from different ...

Try to figure out what it's about! If you're just writing down words, then it isn't really a creative piece of art. I feel like this is about abuse, obviously. ...

Funny. Random. But seriously, this was so random. What are you talking about?

People will still be offended by this poem, despite your intentions. I personally am not religious, so it didn't really offend me. Everybody is different, so we can all see ...

She nibbles on her lunch, But no one really notices. I just wanted to say that I love this line. It was so simple, yet I could see so much. ...

Every other week, there's a room, small, and supposedly comforting. I can never remember the color of the walls, or the size of the sofa. All I ever see, is ...

Some of the rhymes are defiantly forced here. I love the whole idea to the poem though. It has potential. Drugs are always something easy to write about. It's a ...

Wow, this was truly amazing. What got me first was the title. I've been playing the violin most of my life so I was automatically interested. The beginning was good ...

This did make me cry a little bit. I can defiantly remember these feelings, especially at such a young age. I love how you mentioned at eleven that you weren't ...

Ha! Very cute, I like it the way it is. The imagery was sharp and your attitude was very confident and interesting.

I feel like this has potential, but it's lacking something. Help me out? Quick, go! Everybody, just leave me here, like I'm your dust. Ignore me, as if I'm a ...

The repetition and rhymes were a little strange here, but I like the whole idea to the poem. I also think that it would look better with punctuation. When the ...

I like the whole plot to the story, but you defiantly should have played out the mystique longer. I like the fact that her mother was a lesbian. That defiantly ...