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I enjoyed reading this poem, and I must say that you did a pretty good job. I like the whole purpose behind it. I have also befriended people who were ...

It surprises me that you are new to this. This is a very nice piece. I loved the way you wrote this and I love the message it shares. At ...

I personally don't find it too confusing. I found my own meaning when I read it. I don't know if that is within your intentions, but hey, art is what ...

This sounds like skyscraper. It's good to feel inspiration, but you can't copy what you hear. You need more than anything, to be inspired by your feelings. We all know ...

Hey! Here as you requested (: I like the honesty the poem has. The emotions are obviously very raw and very vulnerable, which can be good sometimes. I like the ...

I think that this is pretty nice! It was a creative idea. I don't want to get too grammatical but there was one paragraph that bothered me. Then I saw ...

I like the topic, and I'm sure that plenty of others will, but this gets a little messy at parts. On the second stanza you begin to rhyme and it's ...

Very nice! So as a lot of people have said, it was a relational topic. Some days you just wake up and you notice how much we judge each other ...

me!

This has a nice topic but it just wasn't detailed or grammatically correct. I noticed that somebody already pointed that out so I'm just going to shut my trap. We've ...

I like the overall intent and I'm defiantly not saying that there's anything that you absolutely need to change about this. A poem is a poem and some critique just ...

This was very beautiful and that's all I really want to say. I hope nobody tries to harshly critique this and mold it into something it isn't. It flowed nicely ...

I'm new to this, but I need your honest opinions and all the advice I can get! These fall in no specific category, just things I took around the house ...

Since I have no idea what the contest was, this seemed extremely random and it made me giggle uncontrollably inside. Thank you!

So cute! What type of camera do you have? I think it would be nicer if you slightly cropped it around the edges. You could blur the grass around the ...