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This is a short story. I love nit-picking! It really helps.

I would love love love one c: this is a short story

Haven't read many of these answers, but although I don't favor the idea of abortion, I think women should need the choice. What a good majority of people don't consider, ...

Oh wow, these are absolutely lovely c: It's hard to give criticism on photography, because it's an art, and art needs flaws to be beautiful. But I can tell you ...

Naked branches, stretching out towards an endless sky, in oblique, yet graceful notions. They try to touch the clouds, or finally greet the sun that nourishes them each afternoon. But ...

she should shake secretly so someone sees solemnly.

My mind spins every day.

I would appreciate if a review so much! This is a fictional shorty story.

I would really appreciate it!

Yes, I need harsh criticism :D

If you're comfortable with short stories, I'd really appreciate it.

I honestly don't have any advice for this. The imagery was somewhat frightening, but I enjoyed that. I rarely feel uneasy while reading a poem. You delivered a somewhat common ...

I really enjoyed reading this poem. It was actually very soothing, but at the same time, I felt a wave of emotions run through me (And I'm saying that in ...

In general, I think that this was very well written! What impressed me the most were your rhymes; they didn't seem silly or forced. I actually didn't even notice the ...

I've gradually grown up, watching those around me change; questioning whether they're good people or bad people, and why I see them that way. I've wrapped my small, soft hands ...