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  • Lyric Poetry Re: Being A Non-Writer

    This I created just off the top of my head. It isn't the greatest. Plus, my friend helped me. I greatly appreciate ideas & critiquing to make my writing better. ...

    Jun 28, 2008
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Jasmine's Death

    That was awesome. I know I didn't read the whole thing, but who is John?? Maybe I didn't get far enough into the story yet, because I only got to ...

    Jun 28, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: I wish I could change the world

    This is a great poem, in my opinion. Personally, I don't care about grammar, like some people [LA teacher], but it is very important.

    Jun 28, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Being A Non-Writer

    Always struggling to find a way, To make words fit together. I try my hardest everyday, But nothing ever works for me. Someday they'll be as one, Just wait and ...

    Jun 28, 2008


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