horsez919

This is a really good poem. I'm pretty sure all the rhymes fit together. The...syllables[?] got a bit weird for me, then again I should probably read it out loud ...

I kinda liked this poem. It's very unique. Very descriptive, yeah. I don't have much to say, because I loved this poem. It's very well written. I'm not so sure ...

I like it, and it's you use good descriptive words in some places. I'm not sure about your rhyming. Or if this is a type of poem sort-of thing. [idk] ...

I liked your story, it's a very good start. In the beginning I was kind of confused ... maybe it's just me, but in the beginning I wasn't so sure ...

I really liked this poem. A little violent with the cutting and torturing of the bugs... but there's more horrible things in life. I liked the different kind of words ...

Thank you for commenting on my poem! Veracelle: None taken :D haha. Thank you for your ideas to make my writing better. Gamechanger10: HAHA!! Thanks. I'll work on my "flowbreaks". ...

Okay, this poem is suppose to be a Limerick. It's not that "flowy" in my opinion. The verses are a little bit longer than I would have liked them to ...

DO NOT STOP WRITING!! Your a great writer!! And you've never had any strikes or anything. Everybody who commented so far, basically gave everything, like critiquing and not giving up ...

Everyone already critiqued your writing I won't. :D I liked your whole plot, it was very different and unique. I read some of your other writings and I loved them ...

I love your song!! But..with the other comment, I need to know the tune. To feel how the song moves and sounds I guess. That some things just weren't meant ...

I loved this poem. Your writings are very thought out-I think- and very different in a way. It's cool how...I don't know..old people can relate. Haha Obviously, because they might ...

I liked it...and it seemed to rhyme pretty well. The last line about how we're all still awake or something...was different. It fit in a way though. Overall, it's a ...

:D :) :o Nice poem, in some places the rhythm was kinda weird. From the obnoxious noise they make, To the dangerous harm-- For fun's sake. I kinda agree with ...

Please check out..and maybe comment...on my other poem. It's called summer but in parenthesis it says rewrite. =] ====================== I was recently at the beach, and it inspired me to ...

Hey Mary! I loved your poem. Knowing me, any poem that rhymes I'll love it. Unless it's some poem just rambling on and on without a care. Also, you used ...