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Hey! I really liked your poem. Your rhyming is very good, it didn't seem forced or just too much or anything. pegasi_quill mentioned not to use the word "motionless" in ...

hey Jocelyn!! wow..i remember reading the prologue in your notebook. it does seem A LOT shorter. it took me like 3 days to read it because of other people reading...or ...

Hey! It's a nice start and like jMin actually is pretty emotionally intense. There were some grammar errors and lines that were out of least to me. I'm not 100% ...

Nice writing. Sarcasm isn't my specialty or anything but I do try. Haha. I don't really mind sarcasm unless if someone goes over the top. Like, just one comment after ...

Hey! I love this poem, another person said this too but it's very unique. I really don't have anything to critique you on. :) The pillow of the night descends ...

OK, so some of you may have read the first "Summer" poem that I wrote. Thank youi for the comments by the way. I took some advice. I wrote the ...

Personally, I agree mostly with Vernon. She states very good qualities that have been left out. Vernon says: If you just say this and that, you lose the intended goal. ...

Awesome! I got quite some years... 5 or so. Hah..I just read your 2nd chapter for Poison Love. I don't know why I'm commenting about it on here instead of ...

[I wasn't sure if this should go in "other" or "dramatic"] I actually wrote this poem in school, but recently I revised it and hopefully made it better. Well...yeah! ------------------ ...

Very nice poem. It's kind of along the lines of mine. Except mine is titled "My Life As A Non Writer" Personally I like this one better than mine in ...

HAHA I LOVED IT! I'm not sure if it's classified as poetry but it'll do. It's definately on the creative side! Keep Writing

Very interesting...it's a different topic sort-of. At least, not many people I know write about their nightmares where they're having surgery done by aliens. There's probably critiquing to be done, ...

Very good. I like the rhyming poems you tend to come up with. don't turn you back on the door just a rule of thumb. This one part didn't really ...

This is a very good beginning, very descriptive and once in a while it'll give me a picture. A light breeze blew hair out of my face. I inhaled deeply, ...

Nolan- Thank you!! Wojovox- That's a nice story. I don't know if nice should be used to describe it, but it relates to the poem, like you said. :)