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Thsnks, I know this is weird but when you say my story is confusing it brings me pleasure i like confusing i like confusing people, ecpeially people who are older ...

Hello, Welcome to YWS hope you like it here, Your piece is really good you are doing a good job I think the other person before me covered everything but ...

Is there any spaces left?

hey guys, sorry I have not posted in a while I was kind of busy, but anyway please tell me what you guys think! I had two more classes left ...

Hello, I will give you a short review for your story today, I think it is really well done and think you are doing a very good job writing it ...

Hey, You are doing a great job, Toy did have a few sentenses messed up and yeah you do say "she" alot, But you are doing a good job anyway ...

Hey Hero, I think your story is doing really good with your story, I think everyone else got all the mistakes. so I just wanted to let you know your ...

Hey, this is realy good i like it but like Erin said make the starting a little longer I want it to last longer and want to read more that ...

Hey, Doing a good job I just started reading it was good I didn't get to read it all because I am busy but I hope you write more soon ...

Hey, You are doing a wonderful job. Thank you for writing hoppe to see more and you are doing a really good job with remembering to do caps, Cant wait ...

Hi Destiny, I really like your story it's really good. I hope to see alot more writing from you in the future you have a good idea here so keep ...

Hey, This is really good, like that other person said a few grammar errors but really good writing! loved it and i hope to see alot more of your skills! ...

Hey, This is really good! I am really curious as to what happened to her sister. you are a really good writer but what I would really like to see ...

I heard someone calling me, I hoped it wasn't him. His voice was so deep so strong but I could never understand what he was saying, Maybe I wasn't supposed ...

Hey This is beautiful the first paragraph was a little long but very pretty thank you for writing it I loved reading it and hope to see alot more of ...