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  • Action/Adventure Novels
    Re: Always with me chapter 1 part 3

    Thsnks, I know this is weird but when you say my story is confusing it brings me pleasure i like confusing i like confusing people, ecpeially people who are older ...

    Feb 22, 2010


  • Hello, Welcome to YWS hope you like it here, Your piece is really good you are doing a good job I think the other person before me covered everything but ...

    Feb 17, 2010


  • Is there any spaces left?

    Feb 16, 2010

  • Action/Adventure Novels
    Re: Always with me chapter 1 part 3

    hey guys, sorry I have not posted in a while I was kind of busy, but anyway please tell me what you guys think! I had two more classes left ...

    Feb 16, 2010

  • Action/Adventure Novels
    Re: Part 1 to Unnamed (at the moment)

    Hello, I will give you a short review for your story today, I think it is really well done and think you are doing a very good job writing it ...

    Feb 16, 2010


  • Hey, You are doing a great job, Toy did have a few sentenses messed up and yeah you do say "she" alot, But you are doing a good job anyway ...

    Feb 12, 2010


  • Hey Hero, I think your story is doing really good with your story, I think everyone else got all the mistakes. so I just wanted to let you know your ...

    Feb 12, 2010


  • Hey, this is realy good i like it but like Erin said make the starting a little longer I want it to last longer and want to read more that ...

    Feb 11, 2010

  • Action/Adventure Novels
    Re: Somewhere lost CHAPTER-1

    Hey, Doing a good job I just started reading it was good I didn't get to read it all because I am busy but I hope you write more soon ...

    Feb 11, 2010

  • Action/Adventure Novels
    Re: angels and phoenixes chapter 1

    Hey, You are doing a wonderful job. Thank you for writing hoppe to see more and you are doing a really good job with remembering to do caps, Cant wait ...

    Feb 11, 2010

  • Action/Adventure Short Stories
    Re: angels and phoenixes intro

    Hi Destiny, I really like your story it's really good. I hope to see alot more writing from you in the future you have a good idea here so keep ...

    Feb 8, 2010

  • Action/Adventure Novels
    Re: Golden key chapter 3

    Hey, This is really good, like that other person said a few grammar errors but really good writing! loved it and i hope to see alot more of your skills! ...

    Jan 14, 2010

  • Action/Adventure Novels
    Re: Escaping the Whisper Chpt 1

    Hey, This is really good! I am really curious as to what happened to her sister. you are a really good writer but what I would really like to see ...

    Jan 14, 2010

  • Action/Adventure Novels
    Re: Always With Me Chapter 1 part 2

    I heard someone calling me, I hoped it wasn't him. His voice was so deep so strong but I could never understand what he was saying, Maybe I wasn't supposed ...

    Jan 7, 2010

  • General Articles
    Re: Fog in the vineyard

    Hey This is beautiful the first paragraph was a little long but very pretty thank you for writing it I loved reading it and hope to see alot more of ...

    Jan 7, 2010


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