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when a story starts stewing in my head, it's therapeutic to get them on paper and share. i am kind of reclusive and neurotic, and have a lot of anxiety ...

Better. I personally think you're trying too hard to make this feel "epic", and still have too much distance between protagonist and reader. But that's me. I'm wondering why you ...

so what i'm gathering is, detail can be good, but characters shouldn't take a back seat to the fight. continue character development as the fight progresses. lemme try again: His ...

hey everyone. i've decided to continue a story i've been working on and there's going to be numerous instances of close quarters combat involving hand-to-hand and hand weapons such as ...

i saw that review when i was reviewing Moral Zero Part II, and was going to jump in to defend you, but Snoink had already commented and i felt it'd ...

disliked it because when I was littler I watched this Polly Pocket movie and the mean, bitchy girl in the movie was named Beth. That's similar to why I find ...

i just have a really vivid imagination and i thought i'd get a reference from others on my mental state.