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II. The haircut Oliver was a sophomore. He had the worst luck when it came to getting and finding any decent girlfriends. They all were always the worse ones that ...

it seems that the marines can somehow fight hand to hand with an elite out of no where. elites are supposed to have the strength close to a spartan ,so ...

yah i think you need to keep those details. the first chapter made it feel more realistic and i didnt get the game feeling where everything has a iwerd name ...

hey great first chapter. you gave me the idea to start typing up some scifi military story sometime. WEll, i like halo alot and this story so far is pretty ...

To my love, Savanah You have given me the inspiration to do many great things. I love you dearly I. Intro Everyone, young and old, declare that teenagers don’t know ...

yah pretty good story! i could read it pretty clearly and imagine it all in my head i only seen like one gammar thing lol but it all looks pretty ...

yah i typed it as a third person at first but then i switched it and i guess i missed quite a few errors haha. ty for giving me tips ...

hey :D theres a few spelling corrections needed throughout the story but not much at all. besides that its pretty good goes into description of the horse and also explains ...

hey :) i love how you can put your emotion into your story. When i read this i can feel how much horses mean to you and how involved you ...

The Ultimate Reason to Stop Smoking Weed “Dude we I am so high right now” John said. “I know, man. You smoked all of my weed” Richard said. John feels ...

There are some real nutcases out there these days. Not that I can blame them for going crazy when all of this started. I confess I am a little crazy ...

this is a pretty nice change of things for any vampire story. instead of having everyone fear them or no one knows about them. the people in your story know ...

i liked this story. it sounded as if it was meyer writing it. you captured everything really nicely. good job. IT would seem kind of wierd if in any situation ...

Laying here on the ground, cold, in pain, alone, and surrounded by his dead friends, but still I couldn’t get her out of my mind. My one love I was ...