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Re: Stay Forever [Chapter Two]
Driving to Michelle’s apartment I didn’t know what to expect. Our “girl’s nights” ranged from full on partying to mini-counseling sessions. I was in a particularly good mood at that ...
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Re: Stay Forever [Chapter One]
This is my first romantic fiction story and I would love to hear on what you think! Chapter One “Excuse me, but have you seen Justin Rudolph?” I tapped a ...
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Re: Letting Go
His hands were pale comma delete when put as when they intertwined with hers. They were strong and rough comma delete and and she could feel the class ring cold ...
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Re: A Warm Merry Christmas
Hey there! Here's a photo of a sunset I took last week at around 5:30 PM. I would appreciate if you give your comment or opinion about it! Have a ...
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: Christmas with the Cullens part 2
A few days later, Alice hands me a Celtic gown that has a brown and white long sleeved top and a long, red plaid skirt. "Here Bridgid. Put this on. ...
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Re: sweet sixteen and never been kissed part one
Short story, enjoy! "Large latte, please." I said comma in a timmid voice to the guy stood serving coffe. He looked down at me and I saw a slight smile ...
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: Love lies . (Please review) (:
I dont like the please review it sounds desperate...and I was almost not going to review because of it or the format...bad. If its YWS please let us know, I ...
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: Chapter 1. No name yet
Chapter 1 You should always have a title! Whether it be stupid or asking for suggestions that makes people want to read your writing more I learned it the hard ...
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: Bliss: the Chronicles of Charlie and Logan part 2 (edited)
Okie-dokie guys, here's my expansion. My sincerest apologies that it took so long to get out; between my homework and my evil parents taking my computer away from me, I've ...
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: Kicking Like There's No Tomorrow
My life is in shambles. Those words were ringing through my head as I danced at my senior prom comma with the boy who was supposed to be my boyfriend. ...
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: Golden Wings- chapter 6 part 1
When I got home, mom if you're refering to her like Shelli or something capital Mom wasn’t there but there was a big pile of flyers from her work on ...
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Re: Another Edit... Yaaaaay (YWLJ)
I like the colors. Very, very bright. Haha, I also, will again say, I like the picture. It is simple and not very complex but many people can interpret it ...
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: My first edit of a photo
I really like the colors it gives it a mysterious look and sets it out from the usual. Also, it is a great picture by itself. good view and nice ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Can't Let You Go (Charlie and Logan chapter 3)
Bon jour mes amis! Here's my third part to Charlie and Logan. I have decided to mix Charlie giving birth to Addison with the night that Charlie and Logan first ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Life's Surprises
Sorry if this is short, I accedintley submitted it before it was finished, the next chp. will be out soon. "Sure, tonight sounds great. comma not period " I said ...
Nov 28, 2010
