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Padraic and I with one look know knew who should go. "Padraic you should go. You've always wanted to visit Alaska." "Bridgid, are you sure? We've never been apart more ...

This is good I like how it flows and it is really well written by the way. Keep up the good work. jenn

I could feel my blood pumping through my veins, my heart beating in my chest, and the breaths I took that brought me ever don't know if you mean even? ...

Haha this made me laugh so hard. Due to the terrible exes we have both had we have made a boy cheat sheet....a short 10 page list of what boys ...

I want to apologize first for the cutting. I know it bothers some people, and I'm sorry if it did but writing about it doesn't mean I do it, but ...

i I apologize for the format! Ive I've feared my mistakes to face them to look and to listen Ive sat here alone behind my 2 two.....if the number is ...

Pacing aimlessly with my feet bound through a dispiriting ocean floor The turbulent wave's waves above crack and whip While my thought's thoughts dash and slip The world heavy above ...

When you told me you loved me comma I was so happy. You held me close and whispered in my ear. I loved you. You Loved me. comma not period...I ...

They say write about what you know. I know I hurt you. And I know I'm sorry for it. I'm sorry I didn't think it through comma when I carelessly ...

Okay, I wrote this for my friend and her little sister, her little sister she's little and she has cancer, and it's not going good at all. I had inspiration ...

Overall? Good storyline but I am still left wondering who Amerie is. Also I think you need more information about her past. How did her parents die? Who is Amerie? ...

I reallly liked this and think you need to make it into a novel. although I do think you emphasized the fact that she hated him way to much, but ...

UNDECIDED Im I'm sad for my friend, he and I are very close he keeps hearing voice's in his head saying how dissapointing disappointing ,what a bum and failure he's ...

Justin helped me into his slightly clunky ’93 Chevy. He maintained it quite nicely, despite the driver’s seat being a tad broken and some white paint on the bumper chipping ...

“Take a left at the light and keep going until you make it to the railroad tracks.” I was starting to get an idea to where Justin was leading me, ...