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Hello, This poem is fantastic! The way that you can get so much meaning out of everyday winter things is incredible. You are a very talented writer! I think this ...

Preface Sometimes you just know when your in love. Its hard to explain how you know. Its impossible to put into words. Thats how it is for me. My name ...

I agree with the other people who reviewed this poem. You should widen your vocabulary, its too simple. More detail as well it was really short and that took away ...

Our coach called us up to the bench to explain the game plan. We were to keep our force in the defensive, since they had a strong offensive. I would ...

Heres advice from one writer to another. 1. do NOT let other people get the work for what you put your time into 2. You will not get a lot ...

This may be kind of difficult to read because this is an expert of a post, from an RP that I was once having. It isn't my best work, but ...

Please be aware that this is just the very first chapter of something a little person, and something that is most definitely in the works. January had been synonymous for ...

I’ve been listening to the songs on the disc you gave me in August. The one I ran over with my car. The one that made you leave and never ...

Rated for language and sexual suggestiveness. I Hate Christmas Parties I grimaced at the ugly sight of the wreck which stood before my eyes. Festive bows laid all over the ...

One Introductions “Come one on Zoey what are you waiting for, were we're going to be late to the movies, and I don’t want to get a bad seat.” Zoey ...

I opened my locker, grabbed my basket ball uniform, my shoes and my bag and locked it up again. Tonight would be the most important game of the season; we ...

I'm not sure if this counts as romantic or not, but that seemed to be the category it fit in best... I think it has a slightly goofy tone at ...

"Je t’aime," she said, the French words slurring slightly as she spoke. "I love you to Aimèe, I won’t let them get away with this," Steve declaired comma? strongly. He ...

Ok, I went back and tried to make it the show not tell effect. I really need criticism thats what keeps me going and keeps me wanting to write, to ...

I spend as much as possible of the next few days close to Jasper comma who soothes me with his mood control powers. I do not speak much, for I ...