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I really liked this it kept my attention the WHOLE time I read it and I enjoyed it...althought I think Jay would still be upset about Belle even though he ...

It was really good and looked like a real author wrote it...I was honored to read it and would be honored if you would read mine and edit it and ...

I don’t remember seeing my dad much growing up. That was just the way it was. We called but he didn’t visit much and we didn’t visit him, either. It ...

If you were to walk into fourteen year-old Stephanie Sheppard’s room, you wouldn’t notice anything different. You would still see her blue walls and white carpet, her bed with the ...

Hey, this was pretty awesome. Not saying it was perfect (and really--who am I to judge? Have you read my work? ;)) but, I enjoyed the rich wealth of imagery ...

I REALLY liked this its WAY better than If We Were A Movie No critiques from me :)

If you were to walk into seventeen year old Stephanie Sheppard’s room, you wouldn’t notice anything different. You would still see her blue walls and white carpet, her bed with ...

This reminded me of the notebook and I enjoyed every moment while reading it. It was bittersweet and showed what true love is. It was sad but in a way ...

This was a GREAT poem and I enjoyed every minute that I got to read it :) thanks for sharing. I found no flaws so thats why Im not posting ...

This is ONLY the first part of chapter one so thats why it ends kind of weirdly. Sorry:( If you were to walk into seventeen year old Stephanie Sheppard’s room, ...

“Frankie! (just for the record, I’m a girl not a boy) i think you should delete that because it destracts the reader I’m gunna going to go pick up your ...

I REALLY like this. It was touching and true and I felt like it was too good to be written by a 16 year old. My ONLY nitpick is that ...

The cool breeze rushed over my face and tousled my hair. The rain was coming down just hard enough to drench my hair. Everyone was standing around tears in their ...

This was a well witten piece. You said it is kind-of fiction. Well if it is I hope that... A) Chris and you are still together and B) That your ...

“Summer” Summer is coming, the sun is shining The weather is hot, we better go swimming Sexy girls at the beach, we better take a glance Or will regret it, ...