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Well hey there! I'm HockeyFan87 and I'm here to review your story!(: I am no expert so don't take anything I say to heart. If I offend you by anything ...

Well hey there! I'm HockeyFan87 and I'm here to review your story!(: I am no expert so don't take anything I say to heart. If I offend you by anything ...

Ok so I have to say that i really enjoyed this, but at the same time i kind of agree with Disenchanted. I was kind of confused throughout the story ...

I get a little tired of the cockiness however I like reading when they are cocky and rude to people but on the inside they are actually good people. That ...

I am the same way, however I learned how to deal with it. I start the story when I am sad or mad or whatever and then continue it later ...

I am writing a romance story and I want to make it novel length, a few hundred pages. Its about a teenager and her boyfriend and all that but I ...

“Mandi, do you want bacon?” Mom asked, pushing her brownish-blond hair over her shoulder. “Yes, please,” I replied from my seat at the kitchen table. My eyes moved over what ...

I knew it had to be done. comma instead of period But why did it have to be so difficult? It was dinnertime and dad had just turned off the ...

Hey! I am HockeyFan87 and I'm here to review your story! I am not a pro so don't take what I say personal or to heart. Also, if you doubt ...

“Mandi, do you want bacon?” Mom asked, pushing her brownish-blond hair over her shoulder. “Yes, please,” I replied from my seat at the kitchen table. My eyes moved over what ...

I really liked this! I agree with the other reviews, I couldn't tell if it was girl kissing girl or guy kissing girl, again, no problem either way, but I ...

It was the summer day I loved; the sun beaming down on my blonde hair and making my bright blue eyes shimmer from the reflection of the harbor at the ...

I have decided that I will change the title and get rid of the messed up part of her love life. Thanks! It was the summer day everyone loved: the ...

Hi! I am Hockeyfan87 and I am here to edit your story! My comments will be in some sort of red color (: Marcus Carter was sitting in his room, ...

Hi! I am Hockeyfan87 and I am here to review! Since it is a shorter chapter I am just quoting it all! My comment will be in red. She walked ...