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Re: Sweetheart (Chapter 1)
“ I dont think you want this to be in quotation markd. Large globs of melting chocolate ice cream dripped over my hand and I tried to lick it up ...
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: Sweetheart (Chapter 1)
“ I dont think you want this to be in quotation markd. Large globs of melting chocolate ice cream dripped over my hand and I tried to lick it up ...
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: Sweetheart (Chapter 1)
“ I dont think you want this to be in quotation markd. Large globs of melting chocolate ice cream dripped over my hand and I tried to lick it up ...
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: Sweetheart (Chapter 1)
“ I dont think you want this to be in quotation markd. Large globs of melting chocolate ice cream dripped over my hand and I tried to lick it up ...
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: Chapter Two
Surprise Heather and Bri met me at the door when I got home. “Mandi, Mom’s gone into labor.” Heather said. “But she isn’t due for another month.” I said with ...
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: Chapter One Revised
Authors Note: I know the formating is weird. Its the website not me sorry. Also, I have edited this story so many time I can't count. When you edit please ...
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: Haven Chapter One
I really liked this and can't wait to read more! There were no vivid errors I saw but I wasn't reading carefully I kinda forgot you were wanting to be ...
Oct 27, 2010 -
Re: Bad Girl, Good Liar
This is good although to nitpick Hey. ” I say as I stash the bag. I'd use a comma instead. but thats me The comma after hey.
Oct 27, 2010 -
Re: Take A Chance- 1
Chapter One My alarm went off, disturbing the silence that was surrounding me. I got up slowly, stretching every muscle in my body. I got dressed without a hesitation, having ...
Oct 27, 2010 -
Re: Take A Chance- 1
Chapter One My alarm went off, disturbing the silence that was surrounding me. I got up slowly, stretching every muscle in my body. I got dressed without a hesitation, having ...
Oct 27, 2010 -
Re: My Sign is Vital, My Hands are Cold (kind of re-written)
God is this sad. But good and I felt a connection to the characters which made it so sad so kudos on that one :) -Jenn
Oct 27, 2010 -
Re: Forgotten (Part 1)
I REALLY liked this it was romantic and made me wish I had a boyfriend like that
Oct 27, 2010 -
Re: Allured - a fantasy love story chapter one
Ok I enjoyed it it was good
Oct 27, 2010 -
Re: My First Love Chapter One
Authors Note: this story used to be about a 22 year old not a high schooler so please DO point out the mistakes that are simply because of the age. ...
Oct 27, 2010 -
Re: My First Love Chapter One
Authors Note: this story used to be about a 22 year old not a high schooler so please DO point out the mistakes that are simply because of the age. ...
Oct 27, 2010