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Re: That's So Edward
HAHA! I laughed so hard. If you hate twilight watch Alex Reads Twilight on YouTube. It's super funny. Jenn
Nov 26, 2010 -
Re: "The Best Year" Chapter 1
"And thats how u spell out you multiply a negative times a negative comma " Mr.Smith utterd[color=#FF0000 ]Uttered[/color]. new paragragh "Are u spell out you awake Mrs.Kraft is she married? ...
Nov 26, 2010 -
Re: Run Away 1. [Mature content!] - REVISED
Hey everyone. Usually I write fantasy love stories, but I started this while I was on vacation and I think I have a good story[color=#FF0000]right here is where I got ...
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: Weston mill vampires 1872
(the year is 1872) The sun beamed down on my sweating back and my ginger either say ginger colored hair or red hair hair fell down below my shoulders, it’s ...
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: First chapter of my first post :)
Blood poured from her delicate fingers as she scratched at the wooden door, trying to break free. From the other side she could hear a bellowing laugh and what she ...
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: Tears Of Silence
Ok, I'm gonna start out by saying I don't like reading lyrics and I'm not good at editing them so I appologize. Anywho, it's good I only read half of ...
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: happy never after
i think you need to expand on this. Make us feel sympathetic about this story. Expand on why it will never happen. Is the girl a loser and the guys ...
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: I died for you
I loved you, I cared for you, I died for you. You weren’t sure, you were confused, you hated yourself for missing the chance. It all started one day at ...
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: Let's Say
Let's say there's a girl. You know what I'm talking about: bright eyes, soft lips, the works - don't deny it. Everyone has that girl, the one that makes their ...
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: Chapter Four
NOTE: The format is terrible, I know, it YWS not me, I swear. Present Day “Anya! Nick! Breakfast!” I called outside. Nick was teaching Anya how to put spiral on ...
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: Chapter Three
As I pulled into our driveway I saw Nick’s car. “Hey.” I greeted him. “Hey,” he said kissing me on the cheek. “I ordered pizza before I left the hospital, ...
Nov 6, 2010 -
Re: Chapter Three
As I pulled into our driveway I saw Nick’s car. “Hey.” I greeted him. “Hey,” he said kissing me on the cheek. “I ordered pizza before I left the hospital, ...
Nov 6, 2010 -
Re: Always and Forever
Unexpected twist at the end I didnt expect and I liked that. jenn
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: Six Years
"Oui.” Abigail watched as the tall buildings passed her window. It should be a comma after oui not a period. Other than that I liked this story. But it was ...
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: A Second Chance
This is really good and it shows human mistakes and a real humans life. I like this. You should expand it into a novel cause I know I would read ...
Oct 31, 2010