hobbes

dude,chillax. poetry is not about grammar and mechanics, but it's about the love of writing and it's a way to express feelings and thoughts to others. secondly, I know there ...

a song called " I wish I could change the world" (imagine that!)by ten years after inspired me to write this poem. I have it on my playlist if you ...

ok. this is officially the worst story ever. Im not gonna write anymore of it. if your reading this you already know it's horrible. sincerely-myself

it counted as a review. mods.please dont get angry. please fix this

coolio. It's a little confuzzling but I like that. Also, I gotta agree with niteowl.you gotta use capitalazation. I really enjoy reading your poems so keep writing them.

I can see this as being a novel/book type of thing. it has the "outsiders" type story line, which I find awsome. just a tip,you should describe Natasha more. she ...